Rumours
This feels unfinished to me, but it won't give me any more than this right now.Whispers hang in the air,draped around the room like coats on the front-hall hooksor cobwebs dangling from the cornersof...
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Jan - I'm not an authority on FV but this sounds mighty good to me. Impressive phrasing. cobwebs dangling from the corners of the unsuspecting mind, painting in hues of doubt , apt descriptions of the...
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Thanks, John! I'm glad you liked the wording of this piece. Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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Jan...I can't believe I almost missed this little gem. Wonderful imagery and metaphor....excellent fv IMO. I like the last line of each stanza ...similar but different wording to emphasize each group...
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Sue, thanks! This piece went in a completely different direction to what I thought it was going to become when the first line came to me. I'm glad you like it, and perhaps you are right, there may be...
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Thanks Allan. I believe I have come to terms with the poem's wish to be finished. Jan or you can view my personal poetry webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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